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बचपन
मैं तुम्हें खोना नहीं चाहती
इसीलिए अभी तक स्वयं में
समेटे हूँ
तुम्हारी आवाज़ , क्रियाकलाप
किन्तु अब इन भावनाओं को बाहर लाना
मुझे शोभा नहीं देता
जानते हो क्यूँ ?
क्योंकि तुम्हें मैं बहुत पीछे
छोड़ आई हूँ
तुम्हारी पावन धारा को
एक अंजान सागर में मोड़ आई हूँ
वह अंजान सागर और कुछ नहीं
वही है जो वर्तमान है
जो सागर सा विशाल है
फैला चक्षु सम्मुख
किन्तु इसमें तुम्हारा
कोई अंश नहीं
कोई उमंग नहीं
कोई लहर नहीं
किन्तु फिर भी
मैं तुम्हें खोना नहीं चाहती ।
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समेटे हूँ
तुम्हारी आवाज़ , क्रियाकलाप
किन्तु अब इन भावनाओं को बाहर लाना
मुझे शोभा नहीं देता
जानते हो क्यूँ ?
क्योंकि तुम्हें मैं बहुत पीछे
छोड़ आई हूँ
तुम्हारी पावन धारा को
एक अंजान सागर में मोड़ आई हूँ
वह अंजान सागर और कुछ नहीं
वही है जो वर्तमान है
जो सागर सा विशाल है
फैला चक्षु सम्मुख
किन्तु इसमें तुम्हारा
कोई अंश नहीं
कोई उमंग नहीं
कोई लहर नहीं
किन्तु फिर भी
मैं तुम्हें खोना नहीं चाहती ।
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My soul feels a connection with Hindi poetry.
ReplyDeleteWhat an emotional post!!
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Happy that you could connect to the thought.
Deleteखोना नहीं चाहती तो जी क्यों नहीं लेती अपने बचपन को ?बचपन जीवन का केवल एक वक़्त नहीं बल्कि बचपन तो मन में उठती वोे लहरें हैं जो खुल के खिलखिलाना चाहती हैं , बिना किसी झिझक के उड़ना चाहती हैं , बिना किसी की परवाह के आज़ाद आसमान को छूना चाहती हैं ..............चलो आज से ही बचपन जीना शुरू करो
ReplyDeleteAgree. That's what I meant. Let us keep the child in all of us alive.
DeleteThank you for the comment and your tone is like that of an old friend met suddenly on the way. Loved it!
Beautiful! You have a way with words. Always love reading blog posts in the vernacular.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the appreciation Ritu!
Deletewooww! loved the way you wrote! beautiful!!
ReplyDeleteChildhood is just a stage in our lives. Time waits for no one. Beautifully penned.
ReplyDeleteWow so you have a way with both languages! Beautifully written and loved reading Hindi after so long
ReplyDeleteChildhood is one phase nobody wants to grow out from. However big we may have become but little memories always remind us of those innocent days.
ReplyDeleteI think somewhere deep within each one of us there is a desire to go back to those beete hue din of bachpan...the carefree days. Lovely words u hav stringed into verse. #wordsmithkaurreads #MyFriendAlexa #BlogChatter
ReplyDeleteYou penned down so beautifully, loved reading it.
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कोई भी अपना बचपन खोना नहीं चाहता। बचपन में वो बात है जो किसीमें नहीं।
ReplyDeleteI can't digest this much hindi. I'm sorry. #Myfriendalexa #TomReads
ReplyDeleteKitna sahi likha hai aapne. Let us not let the child in us die. But the truth is it does gradually and we let it go...Kitni baar hum kehte hain ki bachpana mat karo. Jabki bachpana hi toh karna chahiye...Kabhi kabhi toh bilkul!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem. The best phase of life is childhood indeed!
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written. Love reading hindi poems..
ReplyDeleteबचपन हमारे अंदर ही है। इसे गले लगा कर एक बार और जीवन जीना चाहिए। एक बार और खुश होना और खुद के लिए जीना।#damurureads #myfriendalexa damurucreations.com
ReplyDeleteHow relatable...I certainly miss my childhood after getting stuck in the hustle of life but since my son is born I am living it again with him..😊
ReplyDeleteLovely to read this poem about childhood and the hardships of daily life.
ReplyDeleteLovely read! We are all children at heart, just need to find a way out.
ReplyDeleteMy daughter said something like this.Why do people want to grow up?Childhood is so much fun !
ReplyDeleteA really emotional poem. Loved it.
ReplyDeletea well written poem it was nice reading
ReplyDeleteWow Jyotsna, this is so beautifully weaved poem full of emotions. Keep Writing :)
ReplyDeleteSo beautiful written poem, full of love and emotion
ReplyDeleteवाह अद्भुत , सच मे पता ही नहीं चला कहा आगये हम , कहा गया हमारा बचपन.
ReplyDeleteYour words touched my core , being a hindi poet , it made me feel precious and nostalgic.
ReplyDeleteबहुत आनंद आया आपकी कविता पढ़ कर। शुभ कामनाएँ
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This was beautifully written... I respect those who can write such soulful poetry...something I myself am incapable of
ReplyDeletewow such a beautiful poem, you had shared such a beautiful thought in fewer words. #Myfriendalexa #Surbhireads
ReplyDeleteThat’s an intriguing read, Loved the post and your unique writing style.
ReplyDeleteBohot dinobaad badi achchi kavita padhi hao.... :)
ReplyDeleteI can connect so well with the poem!! Thanks for sharing
ReplyDeleteAwesome. Quite emotional.. I liked it.
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Very true, Can feel your words and never want to leave the childhood
ReplyDeleteI love writing poems myself but i guess have to learn from you a lot. awesome read.
ReplyDeletethe best time is when we are kids, but we realize it when we are way ahead of that phase. emotional poem.
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Lovely! We all love to be back at the amazing childhood days, but zindagi shayad issi ka naam hai. Purani yaado ke sahaare, aane waali sab kathinaiyo ko paar karte jaana.
ReplyDeleteSuch a beautiful post. Well-written.
ReplyDelete#journeysays lovely words ! Who does not want those lovely moments.
ReplyDeleteSuch a wonderful poem. Well written
ReplyDeleteSoul stirring poem - I can relate to it totally! Keep writing! I love reading your work. #MyFriendAlexa #DiaryOfAnInsaneWriter
ReplyDeleteChildhood memories are the best. I loved this poem. I could feel it. 😭❤️
ReplyDeleteSimply beautiful!
ReplyDeleteYou have a particular way with words thats totally enticing, lovely poem.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully expressed. Thanks for sharing this. #MyFriendAlexa #CloudandSunshineReads
ReplyDeletei so miss my childhood days and so wish to do a time travel to relive those memories
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Many thanks to all of you for the encouraging comments :)
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely poem on the best phase of life. All of us wish to go back to that phase. We carry with ourselves, we share it sometimes but we can't relive it. Really a great poem.
ReplyDeleteWe all miss our childhood and cherish it's memories 🙂
ReplyDeleteTo some extent can live it again with our kids innocence 🙂
This poem is so emotional that i have stared missing my "Bachpan" even more.
ReplyDeleteKya baat hai. Poem bahut acchi hai. Aur the thoughts behind it.
ReplyDeleteThis is a brilliant piece feeling so emotional after reading it.
ReplyDeletea well written poem it was nice reading it.
ReplyDeletethis is beautiful loved reading it ty for sharing :)
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